[Migrantjusticedocumentary] ITSOB English screener

[Boban Chaldovich]

Amazing!
Thanks for spotting those.
I’ll fix them up later.
I’ll also send a french version for the final review, probably tomorrow.
B

On Mar 23, 2015, at 10:57, Catherine Kendler <catherinekendler at gmail.com> wrote:

> This looks awesome, subs are really well-timed. I found a few things that could improve:
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> 1:04 There should be a space between May and Day
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> 17:42 In the Spanish subs someone added (Montreal) after 1010 Saint-Antoine, which would probably be a good idea here to. Also, I don't think we use a hyphen after Saint in English, right??
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> 26:41 please add the word "and" before "are not allowed..."
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> 35:58 Please change "they're not for myself" to "I no longer do for myself." 
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> CREDITS
> Under Thank-you: Mexicans United for Regularization (since this appears in English in the film we can put it in Eng here too)
> Under Financial Contributions: IWC Artists' Block should also be in Eng, not French
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> On Sat, Mar 21, 2015 at 9:59 AM, Boban Chaldovich <contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:
> Hey folks,
> here’s the low res english version.
> If somebody wants to check it over for the possible glitches or mistakes, that would be great.
> I’ve sent it to Ezra and after he watches it we’ll see when would CP do a screening.
> Him and I talked about doing a co-hosting with SAB or other groups and I’ve reminded him of that.
> I’ve placed 3 motion tracking titles on location of some demos, but maybe we should do more. Not sure. 
> Boban
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