[Migrantjusticedocumentary] Picture Lock!

[Catherine Kendler]

Hi Boban,

Here are my suggestions, and there were a few minor changes to be made to
the transcript (based on the video and a few edits I did of my own
translations) so please use the attached transcript and disregard the
previous one. I'm going to go over the Spanish transcript now and will send
it to you by 11am. Sorry for the delay, I got your message late yesterday
and didn't have time for this.

Thanks, Boban.

14:33 *The* Harper Government... *(You can omit "the" only if it's a news
headline, but this is a full sentence, so it's necessary.)*

19:21 The Action Committee for Non-Status Algerians was able to regularize
most of the over 1000 non-status Algerians who faced deportation in *the*
early 2000s, including Amokrane Benmeziane. *(Again, "the" is missing.)*

21:20 *Evelia's news headline appears here but it also appears at 22:47. I
think it's better at 22:47, after she's done talking, because it won't
interfere with the subtitles. *

24:01 He was arrested while visiting his old high school on his birthday.
On October 16th, 2014, after a week in detention, he was deported to
Mexico. Despite being a minor, he was deported alone.

*(Just some reworking of the sentences to make them more readable.)*31:53
*Noé* Arteaga Organizer with the Immigrant Workers *Centre* *(Accent on Noé
is missing and center should be changed to centre [Canadian spelling].)*

35:01 Organizer with *No One Is Illegal* Toronto *(Should be all capital
letters like it is for Harsha.)*

35:53 This film was collectively produced and directed by eight first-time
filmmakers: *(Just made it more concise.)*




On Mon, Jan 26, 2015 at 8:28 AM, Boban Chaldovich <
contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:

> Hey folks,
> excited to share this link with you. I hope this is a picture locked
> version
> <https://k.bobanchaldovich.com/owncloud/public.php?service=files&t=606202dfcaf4adb50b457acc8752ea60> ready
> to be finalized.
> I have everyone lined up for the next steps, so I need you to look this
> over asap
> and get back to me if there are any glitches or errors that needs to be
> corrected before
> we send this to mix / subtitling.
> Please look this over today and get back to me, so we can correct any
> errors and start subtitles tomorrow.
> Thanks. Cheers.
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> Boban Chaldovich
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