[Migrantjusticedocumentary] Almost picture lock

Mon Oct 27 10:21:38 PDT 2014

Yeah, thanks for all the feedback folks.
There are definitely loose ends to polish, but it's all very nominal.
Julie and I will tighten the soundtrack hopefully this week
and I'll meet Kyle next week to start working on the sound design and mix.
As soon as we picture lock it, I'll redo the colouring and we'll start subtitles.
The outro credits are being redone as well, and I'll send themas soon as finish.
I'm having a super busy week, so except the work with Julie, I won't be having a time
to work on the rest. But It will happen.
Cheers.
b

On Oct 27, 2014, at 12:49, Danielle Holyk <danielle.holyk at gmail.com> wrote:

> Thanks so much for the feedback everyone!
> I´m gone now. but will try to chime in on via the net when i can. I will check in often for the first little bit so I can follow up with coordination. 
> Good call on the Amanda super, we wanted to have one with Turtle clan.
> Also if we add the Roz clip about shelters back we need to have a quick text that says shelters and missions (like what ben talks about) aren´t the same. one asks for ID (the missions) but shelters don´t really, it´s more the problem with cbsa and cops and not knowing their rights. so we need to double check with Amy D if we´re going to include that clip. Amy and I had worked on it but never finalized anything because we took it out but she knows what we´re talking about if you mention it or ask her!
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> Let me know if the credits are up to date on the google doc and I´ll try to rack my brain to make sure we don´t forget anyone. if not can someone update the google doc?
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> Ok i gotta run but will have more time later. the library give a 1hour limit on their computers. 
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> keep in touch.
> and i wanna help get final versions and share them here too.
> high five
> almost there !!!
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> On Sun, Oct 26, 2014 at 9:39 PM, Nicolas Quiazua <nicolas.quiazua at gmail.com> wrote:
> Heyo -  
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> I watched it through again a couple of times and I wanna say that I'm really happy about how this looks. Thank you both Boban and Danielle for putting so much work into porst-post-post produfirstction and for respecting the ideas/structure that we had already come up with as a group. The last version is super tight and the transitions between sections was really well smoothed out. Anyway, happy this project is coming into completion and excited to see it online. 
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> As for comments, only minor ones: 
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> love the new title placement at the beginning. 
> there are long pauses where sound cuts abruptly throughout (but I'm assuming that will be covered by music mix?)
> most people's faces in intv. are over exposed and over contrasted (especially Ben, Amanda, and Harsha)
> love noe's b-roll and the new interview in general
> 5:58 - Noe colours seem different from the first time we see him on the screen 
> 6:38 - b-roll mural v. blue
> 7:09 - roz history is choppy in sound. 
> 9:20 - amanda is described as indigenous organizer both times she appears -- 
> I think we could introduce her here as "Turtle clan, Onondowa'ga Haudenosaunee" & indigenous organizer in the second one.
> 9:20 I would keep the part where she says "people often seek migration here bcz they don't have a choice bcz their territories are beig destroyed" - pre-lude to "canada is not only a colonial"....
> 11:04 - Not very smooth b-roll - (there is a portion in that same cliptowards the end that is smoother i think)
> 13:12 & 14:30: love the music transition  
> The transition to Sandra story is a bit abrupt i think - would be into replacing roz intro to woman shelters and cbsa/police abuse towards those
> 22:53 - weird b-roll sequence -- same spot twice, looks confusing
> 30:00 -- this (and the other too) graph looks awesome
> 34:27 -- looks blue
> I personally like the quotes in the credits
> That is it on my side. 
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> Let me know if this is not clear, and if there is need for any of us to help in what is left to be done. 
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> thank to you all, 
> Nico
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> On Fri, Oct 24, 2014 at 9:43 AM, Boban Chaldovich <contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:
> Hey folks,
> here's the tighter, almost finished version. The thing that need to be resolved are the outro credits.
> Yes or no to quotes being a part of the credits? There's nowhere else to put them.
> Julie and I will be working on the music next week, then Kyle will take on the sound mix.
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> https://k.bobanchaldovich.com/owncloud/public.php?service=files&t=09b5f37d8a1353605ad34eec41e6f0cc
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> On Oct 22, 2014, at 1:28, Nicolas Quiazua <nicolas.quiazua at gmail.com> wrote:
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>> just watched it through and it still looks great. the resistance section is much better and editing is mostly clean!! :)
>> will be watching it again tomorrow and send more specific feedback.
>> Also  happy that our indiegogo reached its goal!
>> Nico
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>> On Sun, Oct 19, 2014 at 1:57 PM, Danielle Holyk <danielle.holyk at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Thanks for the feedback Cat. that's exactly what we need. and we'll be reworking the subs!
>> for the credits. can we all try to go through this and update it .. will be easiest!
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mOJYE9TjyGg81VIETOCoYT_Rlk_WxnnhHMYfozLZYfw/edit
>> and the gogo is getting close. just 30some hours left and i think we can do it so lets give it one last push! personal messages work best!
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>> On Fri, Oct 17, 2014 at 5:41 PM, Catherine Kendler <catherinekendler at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Subtitles don't count, right? They go in after picture lock...? I've included some subtitle comments here partly for my own reference...
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>> Great job guys, this looks awesome. Comments below are mostly about timing and text boxes.
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>> 11:34 cut off Carmelo instead of at 11:36 (subtitle)
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>> 12:10 the (info about PRRA) is missing (subtitle)
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>> 14:38 The Harper government [has] detained... (cut 'has' since it's up till 2013)
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>> 16:38 the "Protest in front of CSIS..." info bar should be left up 2 more seconds
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>> 17:05 I don't think it's necessary to repost Robyn's info bar, in an effort to keep things from getting too cluttered
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>> 18:03 Ben's subtitles start to all be off-timed (subtitle)
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>> 18:07 Ben's info bar is too long. You could cut out "Member of the" since it's implied. Even with this edit I don't think it's possible to read both the info bar and the subtitles, so maybe the bar could show up at 18:11 and the clip could be drawn out a bit when he pauses after saying "survivre". 
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>> 21:44 be called ON to... (subtitle)
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>> 22:30 I would give the stat about public schooling another second on the screen
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>> 23:54 I think you should cut Carmelo off a second earlier so that we don't see his bird-neck movement which looks kind of silly and takes away from the strength of his comment
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>> 33:15 With the support OF... (subtitle)
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>> 33:16 If you want to include info about Sandrine's education it should show up at 11:54, that's a good spot since there's more time then, and this second time we see her no info bar is necessary.
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>> 36:20 Careful with the Thank-you's--a couple of names appear twice. 
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>> I suggest putting the credits either before or after the final comments from Sandrine, Evelia, etc. With the subtitles it looks too busy and you can't read both at once. If you don't like the idea, then at least give each credit a couple of seconds more, so that they run all the way to the end of Sandra's final comment or even a few seconds after.  
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>> On Fri, Oct 17, 2014 at 8:38 AM, Boban Chaldovich <contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:
>> Hey folks,
>> Danielle and I worked on getting this done, so check it out and send us your feedback on the almost picture locked version of the movie.
>> We didn't put the latest music, but this is pretty much where it will be, in terms of the edits.
>> Send us your feedback asap, so we can finalize this.
>> Thanks.
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