[Migrantjusticedocumentary] Boban shared »ISB Nov 10 2014.mov« with you

[Catherine Kendler]

Alright, thanks for the heads up Boban and thank you for all your work.

So, folks have a month to look at this last version Boban sent out but to
avoid it getting forgotten about, could everybody please have a watch as
soon as they can, and send their recommendations??? So that everything will
be all set for when Boban gets back?

Besitos to all,
Cat

On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 3:28 PM, Boban Chaldovich <
contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:

> Unfortunately,
> nobody confirmed that it's a go, so I didn't prep everything for sound mix
> and subtitles.
> As I'm leaving tomorrow morning, it will have to wait until I get back on
> Dec 11th.
> b
>
> On Nov 12, 2014, at 15:16, Catherine Kendler <catherinekendler at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> Hi guys,
>
> Looking good. Is this the picture locked version??? The English transcript
> is updated but I will wait to add the few changes to the Spanish one until
> I know it's the final version.
>
> Here are my corrections in case there's still time for corrections... They
> are all small edits but I really feel that typos and grammatical errors can
> kill a professional and authoritative tone in an instant, so I'm hoping
> someone has time to put these changes in, it would be hugely appreciated.
>
> 14.29 *The* Harper *g*overnment detained nearly 80,000 migrants from 2006
> to 2013, including thousands of children.
>
> 17.48 Amokrane Benmeziane *Former Action Committee of Non-Status
> Algerians* *(I would take "Member of" out of everybody's info bar. It's
> totally unnecessary and clutters the screen.)*
>
> 19.16 The Action Committee for Non-Status Algerians was able to
> regularize most of the over 1000 non-status Algerians who faced deportation
> in *the* early 2000s, including Amokrane Benmeziane.
>
> 21.17 Evelia Castrej*ó*n Santoyo Refugee claimant* from Mexico* *(The
> accent is missing on Castrejón, and in order to be consistent I would add
> "from Mexico", since this is what it says for Carmelo.) *
>
> 23.56 *He was arrested while visiting his old high school on his
> birthday. He was deported to Mexico on October 16th, 2014, after a week in
> detention. *Despite being a minor, he was deported alone.
>
> 31.50 NO*É*
>
> 34.47 *Could someone please fill in this blank for me, I can't hear what
> he's saying: *
> Solidarity City is an ongoing campaign by No One Is Illegal Toronto that’s
> been called ??, Access Without Fear, and now Solidarity City.
>
> 35.52 *This film was collectively produced and directed by eight
> first-time filmmakers* (*I would cut "a group of" since it already says
> "collectively")*
>
>
>
>
>
> On Mon, Nov 10, 2014 at 10:55 PM, Boban <contact at bobanchaldovich.com>
> wrote:
>
>>     [image: ownCloud]      Hey there,
>>
>> just letting you know that Boban shared *ISB Nov 10 2014.mov* with you.
>> View it!
>> <https://k.bobanchaldovich.com/owncloud/public.php?service=files&t=d2dd62229ed6e6d321d5908e9f065eca>
>>
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