[Migrantjusticedocumentary] Boban shared »ISB Nov 10 2014.mov« with you

Boban Chaldovich contact at bobanchaldovich.com
Wed Nov 12 12:28:13 PST 2014


Unfortunately,
nobody confirmed that it's a go, so I didn't prep everything for sound mix and subtitles.
As I'm leaving tomorrow morning, it will have to wait until I get back on Dec 11th.
b
On Nov 12, 2014, at 15:16, Catherine Kendler <catherinekendler at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi guys,
> 
> Looking good. Is this the picture locked version??? The English transcript is updated but I will wait to add the few changes to the Spanish one until I know it's the final version. 
> 
> Here are my corrections in case there's still time for corrections... They are all small edits but I really feel that typos and grammatical errors can kill a professional and authoritative tone in an instant, so I'm hoping someone has time to put these changes in, it would be hugely appreciated. 
> 
> 14.29 The Harper government detained nearly 80,000 migrants from 2006 to 2013, including thousands of children.
> 
> 17.48 Amokrane Benmeziane Former Action Committee of Non-Status Algerians (I would take "Member of" out of everybody's info bar. It's totally unnecessary and clutters the screen.)
> 
> 19.16 The Action Committee for Non-Status Algerians was able to regularize most of the over 1000 non-status Algerians who faced deportation in the early 2000s, including Amokrane Benmeziane.
> 
> 21.17 Evelia Castrejón Santoyo Refugee claimant from Mexico (The accent is missing on Castrejón, and in order to be consistent I would add "from Mexico", since this is what it says for Carmelo.) 
> 
> 23.56 He was arrested while visiting his old high school on his birthday. He was deported to Mexico on October 16th, 2014, after a week in detention. Despite being a minor, he was deported alone.
> 
> 31.50 NOÉ
> 
> 34.47 Could someone please fill in this blank for me, I can't hear what he's saying: 
> Solidarity City is an ongoing campaign by No One Is Illegal Toronto that’s been called ??, Access Without Fear, and now Solidarity City.
> 
> 35.52 This film was collectively produced and directed by eight first-time filmmakers (I would cut "a group of" since it already says "collectively")
> 
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> On Mon, Nov 10, 2014 at 10:55 PM, Boban <contact at bobanchaldovich.com> wrote:
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>  	 Hey there,
> 
> just letting you know that Boban shared ISB Nov 10 2014.mov with you.
> View it!
> 
> Cheers!
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