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[Catherine Kendler]

Hi guys,

Looking good. Is this the picture locked version??? The English transcript
is updated but I will wait to add the few changes to the Spanish one until
I know it's the final version.

Here are my corrections in case there's still time for corrections... They
are all small edits but I really feel that typos and grammatical errors can
kill a professional and authoritative tone in an instant, so I'm hoping
someone has time to put these changes in, it would be hugely appreciated.

14.29 *The* Harper *g*overnment detained nearly 80,000 migrants from 2006
to 2013, including thousands of children.

17.48 Amokrane Benmeziane *Former Action Committee of Non-Status Algerians* *(I
would take "Member of" out of everybody's info bar. It's totally
unnecessary and clutters the screen.)*

19.16 The Action Committee for Non-Status Algerians was able to regularize
most of the over 1000 non-status Algerians who faced deportation in *the*
early 2000s, including Amokrane Benmeziane.

21.17 Evelia Castrej*ó*n Santoyo Refugee claimant* from Mexico* *(The
accent is missing on Castrejón, and in order to be consistent I would add
"from Mexico", since this is what it says for Carmelo.) *

23.56 *He was arrested while visiting his old high school on his birthday.
He was deported to Mexico on October 16th, 2014, after a week in detention.
*Despite being a minor, he was deported alone.

31.50 NO*É*

34.47 *Could someone please fill in this blank for me, I can't hear what
he's saying: *
Solidarity City is an ongoing campaign by No One Is Illegal Toronto that’s
been called ??, Access Without Fear, and now Solidarity City.

35.52 *This film was collectively produced and directed by eight first-time
filmmakers* (*I would cut "a group of" since it already says
"collectively")*





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